Silly, fun and adorable~ :] Did I catch the reference that Braeburn crushes on Big Mac correctly? I'm referring to this line: "…passing by framed pictures from past apple family reunions. He stopped for a moment to stare at one in particular…"
Also, I thought I should inform you of a small slip-up you made. You wrote the following: "…The Wonderbolt managed, taking Braeburn's hat off his head and laying it over the lantern…" and then a few lines later "…Braeburn nodded, a look of self accomplishment jokingly across his face as he pulled his hat off of the Wonderbolts head…" Obviously a minor mistake. You're writing well. :]
673604 -looks around sheepishly- I <3 Sooooooooooo...yespls! :D My top 5 ponies (because I'm weird and unique like this)...: 1 - Big Mac 2 - Derpy 3 - Braeburn 4 - Guard Ponies 5 - Soarin' Runner up/Notable mention/6 - Noteworthy (also known as Blue Note or Blues) I think y'all can understand the list, if you think on it... >w> And if there was a guard pony episode where one or two get enough screen time to be part of the main cast for the episode, then guard ponies would jump to #2. :P
The update alert for this has gone haywire. I have four update notifications from today, and there's not one new chapter. And the last chapter caused three update notices to be sent. What the smeg is going on?
Soooooo... this is brokeback mountain, just ponyfied???
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Eclipse: If by ponified brokeback mountain you mean an m/m romance story where they do it? Then yes.
Can't wait for more
Arrrug! You're horrible. I was so waiting for this the entire chapter then you cut off... Arrrg! GG
Loving it so far. So little M/M romance about and I tend to miss it.
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Eclipse: Oh don't worry your in for a treat next chapter!
Dude....
I need the next chapter.
Funny and Cute...I love it!
Silly, fun and adorable~ :] Did I catch the reference that Braeburn crushes on Big Mac correctly? I'm referring to this line: "…passing by framed pictures from past apple family reunions. He stopped for a moment to stare at one in particular…"
Also, I thought I should inform you of a small slip-up you made. You wrote the following:
"…The Wonderbolt managed, taking Braeburn's hat off his head and laying it over the lantern…"
and then a few lines later
"…Braeburn nodded, a look of self accomplishment jokingly across his face as he pulled his hat off of the Wonderbolts head…"
Obviously a minor mistake. You're writing well. :]
Looking forward to more!
-Silver
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*facehoof* how did we miss that?! Ah well, at least it didn't distract from the story too much for you. XD an edit may be in order.
As for the Crushing on Mac ref... What do you think? ;P
Thanks for the kind words.
-Solar
673604 -looks around sheepishly- I <3
Sooooooooooo...yespls! :D
My top 5 ponies (because I'm weird and unique like this)...:
1 - Big Mac
2 - Derpy
3 - Braeburn
4 - Guard Ponies
5 - Soarin'
Runner up/Notable mention/6 - Noteworthy (also known as Blue Note or Blues)
I think y'all can understand the list, if you think on it... >w>
And if there was a guard pony episode where one or two get enough screen time to be part of the main cast for the episode, then guard ponies would jump to #2. :P
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Most epic comment ever. Thank you very much, good sir. X3
-Solar
Thischapterohmygoditwasbeautifulireallyneedtostoptypinglikethis....Sorry. But really great chapter! Next chapter please
The update alert for this has gone haywire. I have four update notifications from today, and there's not one new chapter. And the last chapter caused three update notices to be sent. What the smeg is going on?
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There have been some minor edits made to chapter two, could that have caused it?
-Solar
676373 I don't think so. And it wouldn't explain the triple-message for one update.
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Eclipse: I just don't know what went wrong.