Can someone tell me why it's doing two of the author's notes. It's getting annoying.

6105345 new chapter

6081634 giving you a head's up, if you want your character in the story, you better do it quickly. The chapter when the OC will arrive is very soon.

love this chapter, and loved the whole LEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEROY JEEEEEEEEEENKI *gets cut due to death*

6115446 yeah, also what did you think of nyx going apeshit on the Geth (tell me you listened to the music while reading it). What were you're thoughts on letting Jenkins die but Nihlus live. As well as what Nyx looked like when she went into Nightmare Assault

6115745 sorry, my baby bro is asleep

6115748 oh, well it indestructible by disturbed. You could also wear earbudds. But what did you thibk of nyx

6115761 pure awesome

6115748 also, so long as no one posts their OC, you may end up being the winner of Nyx's first companion.

6115761 now im more excited to get my OC in this story

6115768 also, i am doing a fic with nyx in it

6115771 the fight scene I had for nyx was slightly inspired by what happened between Gohan, Android 16, and the Cell Juniors in Dragon Ball Z.

6115793 nice, i love DBZ

6115796 yeah, also, soon I'll be doing an Intermission Chapter, where we will explore how life is going back home, SPOILER: not good. Twilight just slightly pissed at Celestia.

6115829 not her fault, someone put a wall in her way

guess where thats from

6115833 celestia damn it, now I want to put caboose in this story. PS not happening

6115842 XD

6115846 yeah also did you not question that her new sword shot fire, or in the last chapter how nyx once fought an ARMY OF THE DEAD. (Will do a prequel story on that)

6115853 nope, land of pastel ponies, no questions asked

6115861 touche. Also, will you give a list of three sniper rifle and three assualt rifles that you would want your OC using. This is just for simplicity. You pick three, and I would choose the one I feel would most fit her. You can also have a personal fav, but you must say why you want her to have it.

6115879 snipers
1: widow
2: viper
3: incisor

assault rifles
1: geth pulse rifle
2: phaston
3: avenger

my favorites
1: collector assault rifle, it gets me out of a sticky problem
2: javelin, yeah its heavy, but very powerful, and useful

6115913 DUHN DUHN DUHN

6115921 yeah, look up Return of Snowdrop.

6115935 can't find it

6115938 try The Return of Snowdrop. Maybe there is a reaction video or something like that, but I've seen the video.

6115969 awesome

6115991 well, I'm hitting the bed but, when you get the chance, reread the chapter and, when it tells you to play the music, play it. I wrote the damn thing, and I got goosebumps reading it. Then again, I'm easily amused.

6116066 *in caboose's voice* ok

6116066 eyo

6117176 just wanted to let you know, you can make total of three ocs for the story. So create away, man.

6117260 oc, also, the music, AWESOME!!! it has been caboose APPROVED

6117260 oc races please

6117267 well, the only guidelines for the second character is that it can only be batarian, volus (will be alot better than you think), or krogan. The third character can only be salarian, asari, or drell.

name: thrax
race: krogan
gender: male
weapons: claymore shotgun and the predator pistol
class: soldier
bio: he is on the citadel for his shore leave, simply put

name: sen T'sola
race: asari
gender: female
weapons: predator pistol
class: adept
bio: she is there to help the other races to understand the asari culture and people

6117314 I never said she would meet them on the citadel

6117341 THE TROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLS

6117341 how are you though

6117515 tired, I'm emotionally drained after doing that last chapter. So many ways that could go wrong with Nihlus and Jenkins, I had to choose. Jenkins was just a kid, and Nihlus was important to my story. It's always hard when you have to kill characters you like.

6117528 i know that feeling

6117528 so, what else is new

6117528 eyo

6119149 After this story is done, I hope to do two out of these three stories, all taking place between ME1 and ME2:

Retribution-Nyx's adventures with her crew as she tries to avenge Shepard's 'death', prepare for the Reaper invasion, and do her duty as a representative of Equestria.

Invasion-With Nyx out in the Milky Way, the rest of the Crusaders are called out to respond to a distress signal from Babs Seed, coming from Manehatten. Little do they know that what will happen will not only determine the fate of the city, but their entire world as well.

Ascension (Not final name, and not sure if I will do this story)-With the Council's permission, Twilight, as well as Equestria and it's neighboring kingdoms, can only build a total of three dreadnought ships to represent the world's fleet. What creations will they unvale.

To give you an idea of what Invasion will be, here's a hint.

6119270 nice i think they are awesome

6119543 the first few chapters of Retribution and all of Invasion will happen in the same time frame, but what do you think of those stories? Also, Nyx will not be staying aboard the Normandy when Shepard leaves. She'll be taking Nihlus's ship.

6119270 the first two are interesting, due those

6119846 yeah, also, wanna take a guess at what Nihlus' s ship looks like?

6119851 i have no clue

6119881 since my computer seems to be having trouble uploading the picture, look up Titan AE Valkryie.

6119888 cool ship