6193576 Indeed, I wasn't trying to portray Iron Will as a bad guy. Just like any landlord, they can choose to either be generous, total jerks, or a mix of both. But I appreciate the fact that you're continuing to read the story.
Anon now has three Sirens that he can not get pregnant, one humanized-Equine who he probably can't fertilize, and a magician; 5 women that he has the luck obligation to satisfy.
Honestly when I first read the description I was expecting something completely different, never thought this story would be hardcore clop. Looking back I don't know why I was surprised after the prequel to this, but oh well. Kind of wishing for a little more story though, since I like the developing story here, so I'll continue watching it for now.
DAMN really getting good, wonder if vynil will get into the "gang" more sooner than later. Also about pregnancy have you considered one of the Dazzlings getting preggers, I know in the story it has been stated they cant, but since twilight is getting some apperenaces and shimmers retains her magic anything is possible? Or maybe the Dazzlings have stayed in human form too long making a possibility?
Aria dealing with Iron Will and her time with Anon was entertaining to read. Also, seeing Trixie return brings a smile on my face.
Wow. First chapter I've read that filthy rich didn't act stubborn.
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Wait... so, a few days, yet he says he's been going on for months? That's a weird slip of text.
Still, he gave the guy three weeks, while not as overly generous, he still was cordial enough to give him time to pack up and leave.
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Indeed, I wasn't trying to portray Iron Will as a bad guy. Just like any landlord, they can choose to either be generous, total jerks, or a mix of both. But I appreciate the fact that you're continuing to read the story.
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Hey, if I gave up a story because of one unreasonable thing then I'd be dropping fanfiction altogether.
Besides, you get used to characters being bashed in stories, even official ones.
Nice chapter, but there's a few minor things you may want to edit.
That should be "What's".
That should be "Let's".
And I suggest capitalizing that.
DIIIIAAAAAMOND TIAAAAARRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
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Thank you for catching those for me!
Ahh harm's way, you never cease to amaze me, Keep up the great work
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Thank you!
Anon now has three Sirens that he can not get pregnant, one humanized-Equine who he probably can't fertilize, and a magician; 5 women that he has the
luckobligation to satisfy.Honestly when I first read the description I was expecting something completely different, never thought this story would be hardcore clop. Looking back I don't know why I was surprised after the prequel to this, but oh well. Kind of wishing for a little more story though, since I like the developing story here, so I'll continue watching it for now.
cant wait, omg!
DAMN really getting good, wonder if vynil will get into the "gang" more sooner than later. Also about pregnancy have you considered one of the Dazzlings getting preggers, I know in the story it has been stated they cant, but since twilight is getting some apperenaces and shimmers retains her magic anything is possible? Or maybe the Dazzlings have stayed in human form too long making a possibility?
6205479 does that make them the "new mane six?"
6305072 I think it does.
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I agree The Cosmic Consciousness