Reaching the dark side of the moon

by The Psychopath

A blemish gone(Not a real chapter)

As you can all see now, I got rid of that horrid final chapter. Instead, I want to see what you readers want to see afterwards in the story so I can base that chapter of the story around your choices. That final chapter was gnawing at my brain screaming: "Psycho! Your imagination isn't so terrible! Fix this up, or I'll stop working to make your heart beat."

Who wouldn't bend at that kind of threat coming from your brain? If there are choices that are similar in structure, then I'll base the next chapter around that.

Comments

[kararnos]

dude i'll love to help if you got skype see if you can find me name on skype is (Passionate heart)

[The Psychopath]

1180947 I don't have skype. Anything similar to internet chatting, like facebook and stuff, I deeply hate. They bore me and annoy me tremendously.

[Cellin]

That final chapter was gnawing at my brain screaming: "Psycho! Your imagination isn't so terrible! Fix this up, or I'll stop working to make your heart beat."

Really? If my brain threatens me, it usually threatens to let one of my more... troubled Persona's run around unaccounted for.

[musicman722]

have the princesses appear on a royal visit(?) and catch Cosmos with Twilight in the tree. Confusion ensues and Cosmos is captured and wondering what the hell is going on. Before Celestia banishes(?) her Twilight intervenes and explains situation. Talks ensue and Layda begins to question Cosmos' true intentions.

That's all i got so far.

[The Psychopath]

1181851 Seems good, but let's see what the other suggest too.

[The Psychopath]

1181851I'll be using this scenario, then.

[musicman722]

1224786...ERMAHGERD! I WIN!