Hmm... Just going to say this. Celestial harem overplayed, not interesting and skipped that part near completely :( sorry not trying to be an ass it was just meh for me. On the other hand appart from the future clop that's going to be in the next chapter , I honestly want wait to see just how even and Luna's relationship grows and how they 1: finaly come out to the public with it. 2: get discovered by some random bystander/castle staff . I honestly hope it comes Down to luna and the "fuck you I'm a princess and I do who I want" shpeel. But in a more romantic sense mind you :p

BUT. This is your story lol and I will patiently wait to see just what you have in store.

Mane Medic

5971692 I'm going to have to agree with you because you stole all my points but again keep up the good work

5971692
Luna? I want to see what happens when Celestia's little secret gets out. This whole harem business she's got going on is filthy and disgusting. And I don't mean because of the sex. How many cases do you think she's had in front of her where somebody else has been doing precisely what she's been doing and she's punished them for the sake of morality? What is she going to say to them when they come out of the woodwork to call her on her rank hypocrisy?

6160034
I've honesty ignored that bit with celestia. It was unneeded clop and did nothing to forward the plot of the story. Even if it tried to do so ...

please make more parts i realy like this story