What a bad luck for the Dazzlings
I hope everything will improve, and get along with sunset

I was surprised to see Dinky was the villain
I'm dying to know what happens
I hope to see the next chapter soon

Damn, evil girls scouts are evil.

A little bit of criticism I have for this story and the chapters after is to have more descriptions of things. Like how do they look in the bikinis, maybe they do some sexy moves to get more money, or something like that. Also this is going great towards the inevitable and I hope that it is quite hot.

Whaddatwist!

I can honestly see Adagio being a Stripper. But if you need any help maybe take a look at my Dazzling Fanfic

So we're supposed to laugh off the fact that Derpy and Dinky are fucking whores who deserve to be skinned alive?

whatever.