One Handsome Stoned VISIONARY, add some mechanical extraction by one claptrap unit, two loaderbots and a escape during Tirak's antics in the capital as cover and you have one freed possibly near psychotic Displaced keeping it together barely by rage.
We ask the many whom may read our story thank Isumo1489 For their labor into enhancing the emotions and beauty of our tentacle typing of keys. The Second chapter be what we speak of.
Definitely an improvement. Before I was Just tracking the story but now I'm going to favorite it. Also I have a question, so it was Lilith who 'convinced' Celestia and Luna that Jack was bad, but Jack talked like it was a he.
"Well Luna, I honestly thought you had a shot at telling Celestia that she was being duped by the same guy that stranded me here years ago. Heck, he’d practically said to my face Discord’s favorite saying, “Where’s the fun in making sense?”
So was Lilith actually a guy? Maybe I'm just confused as to who Jack was talking about.
5515571 It seemed like he was talking about the merchant but the only person that I seen was manipulating Celestia was Lilith. It just confused me because he was saying 'he' when it seemed he was talking about Lilith.
Note, in the earlier bit, he doesn't know for sure if the Siren IS Lilith, and moreover the He was someone Jack had encountered that had him wind up in Equestria. As with most Displaced stories, Merchant is certainly the most likely possibility. And Merchant is likely the reason another Displaced WOULD be there...so 'Lilith' being there would be his fault. ... as for Lilith...well...not everything is always straight forward.
5515587 We may have had 'personal' events in our appendage when our little human was struck, change is always good entertainment for us, his tragedy and rage from before shall fuel his burning star to let us breach other worlds through what he sends! *plays a possible future recording of Handsome Jack laughing with a purple glowing stare while his hyperion robots march through a wormhole possibly to other realities where other displaced may be.* We so hope our little human will 'correctly' follow the path we lead him on, we would not wish to further 'correct' our little human to what he is meant to become, but like any parent one must be HARSH... *a shuddering cackle releases*
5715521 Well sadly we cannot see the link of thou reaction to jack's banter, though we promise he'll have more colorful reactions to come. He doth be quite angry for more than one reason.
5723656 We are working on more though we fear for the quality as we search for a humble mortal editor whom may bring it shine, for our clumsy inky appendages are often not precise. Since there is plenty of room for error when we drop humans into these universes. but if thou know of such resource we wouldn't mind advice for it.
We ask the many whom may read our story thank Isumo1489 For their labor into enhancing the emotions and beauty of our tentacle typing of keys. The Second chapter be what we speak of.
5514996 We wish to hear how thou thinks, as much work has gone into it so it is only fitting for further development.
This is good.
and I really want to see where this Nightmare Moon thing will be going.
Definitely an improvement. Before I was Just tracking the story but now I'm going to favorite it. Also I have a question, so it was Lilith who 'convinced' Celestia and Luna that Jack was bad, but Jack talked like it was a he.
So was Lilith actually a guy? Maybe I'm just confused as to who Jack was talking about.
This chapter is great. I'm going to fav it. Hope the next chapter comes soon.
5515358 he's talking about the merchant,I think. Well at least I assume so.
5515571 It seemed like he was talking about the merchant but the only person that I seen was manipulating Celestia was Lilith. It just confused me because he was saying 'he' when it seemed he was talking about Lilith.
5515587
Note, in the earlier bit, he doesn't know for sure if the Siren IS Lilith, and moreover the He was someone Jack had encountered that had him wind up in Equestria. As with most Displaced stories, Merchant is certainly the most likely possibility. And Merchant is likely the reason another Displaced WOULD be there...so 'Lilith' being there would be his fault. ... as for Lilith...well...not everything is always straight forward.
5515587 We may have had 'personal' events in our appendage when our little human was struck, change is always good entertainment for us, his tragedy and rage from before shall fuel his burning star to let us breach other worlds through what he sends!
*plays a possible future recording of Handsome Jack laughing with a purple glowing stare while his hyperion robots march through a wormhole possibly to other realities where other displaced may be.*
We so hope our little human will 'correctly' follow the path we lead him on, we would not wish to further 'correct' our little human to what he is meant to become, but like any parent one must be HARSH... *a shuddering cackle releases*
5715521 Well sadly we cannot see the link of thou reaction to jack's banter, though we promise he'll have more colorful reactions to come. He doth be quite angry for more than one reason.
more please also awesome chapters
5723656 We are working on more though we fear for the quality as we search for a humble mortal editor whom may bring it shine, for our clumsy inky appendages are often not precise. Since there is plenty of room for error when we drop humans into these universes. but if thou know of such resource we wouldn't mind advice for it.