I actually really enjoyed this chapter, but the main reason why I would have to say that it could have been done better is because it made so little sense.

Did vinyl jump off a bridge, and she was coming to and falling back unconscious, having dreams about what led up to the jump? Where did Luna fit into all of this? Did Neon Lights drug vinyl and rape her at her own home? Did Vinyl get crushed under some falling speakers?

I read through it, paying very close attention to every detail, but it was very spotty and hard to follow. I am not even sure that the plot was linear. Still yet, the writing was good, and I got the basic gist of it, enough that I was able to enjoy it. One final question though, did Vinyl die? And if she did, does that mean that Luna has the power to bring ponies back to life in this fic?