4801914 Thank you for the critic, I kind of chugged this out fast. I'm going to have Aunt Celestia assist me with the pacing and such. I usually keep editing for a while. I didn't have the time though, I just got back from Bronycon so I'll make sure to fix the problems the best I can, since I'm technically counting Aunt as my co-writer, they will be resolved quicker.
4802450 If you think thats what I'm doing, your mistaken, I've read that story but the shipping i'm doing is not the same and i'm progressing it differently and its gonna end differently so please don't think otherwise.
4807789 Nope, I know what i'm doing, I've read that story, this different then it, it might have the same concept, its a different shipping and i'm making it progress and end differently!
Woah now, I wasn't going in guns blazing, I was just giving the opportunity to do what should've been done. The last time this happened, my notifications were going fucking haywire for four days with people arguing the issue.
M8, ive read Lunar Domination already, and it seems like you just copied the entire 1st chapter, other than minor detail changes and name changes, its basically the same. I understand getting "inspiration" for something, but just try to change it up a little more than just names and other minor details, I hope you make chapter 2 a bit different than the original, otherwise it will be just a waste of time, not bad though so far, just yea... Keep it original! Stay Classy m8 /)
your welcome i like this chapter. just let know when you want me to send the rest of what we worked on.
4801914 Thank you for the critic, I kind of chugged this out fast. I'm going to have Aunt Celestia assist me with the pacing and such. I usually keep editing for a while. I didn't have the time though, I just got back from Bronycon so I'll make sure to fix the problems the best I can, since I'm technically counting Aunt as my co-writer, they will be resolved quicker.
Stealing is no good!
4802377 Dear Samaru163, its fixed!
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I think we both know that's not what he meant.
4802450 If you think thats what I'm doing, your mistaken, I've read that story but the shipping i'm doing is not the same and i'm progressing it differently and its gonna end differently so please don't think otherwise.
4807789 Nope, I know what i'm doing, I've read that story, this different then it, it might have the same concept, its a different shipping and i'm making it progress and end differently!
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Regardless you should at least credit your inspiration. It's common courtesy.
4807838 Got it, can we plz just calm down, i'm gonna give credit at the bottom, give me a moment to put it there!
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Woah now, I wasn't going in guns blazing, I was just giving the opportunity to do what should've been done. The last time this happened, my notifications were going fucking haywire for four days with people arguing the issue.
I'm not mad or anything, just so you know
M8, ive read Lunar Domination already, and it seems like you just copied the entire 1st chapter, other than minor detail changes and name changes, its basically the same. I understand getting "inspiration" for something, but just try to change it up a little more than just names and other minor details, I hope you make chapter 2 a bit different than the original, otherwise it will be just a waste of time, not bad though so far, just yea... Keep it original! Stay Classy m8 /)
A bit quick. Could use a little more detail.