As a young stallion starts his first job, he falls in love with a certain blonde mare and tries to figure out how to get her to notice him.
Pretty good so far. The beginning could use some grammar editing, but it got better as it went.I really hope this doesn't get downvoted to hell just for being an OC story. I can tell it has potential. Keep up the good work.
You can always look for some proof readers
4042319 I apologize. I have had a couple of people read it... but it was for other reasons too.
Pretty good so far. The beginning could use some grammar editing, but it got better as it went.
I really hope this doesn't get downvoted to hell just for being an OC story. I can tell it has potential. Keep up the good work.
You can always look for some proof readers
4042319 I apologize. I have had a couple of people read it... but it was for other reasons too.