To the ponies of Ponyville, Butterscotch is the kind animal warden of the town, but what lies behind his shy demeanor is a stallion no one would have ever imagined.
You know I really like how different you portray Butterscotch from his usual personality and from Fluttershy. Its hard to believe for me that he is secretly a confident, badass fighter that also serves as the town's best bachelor. Except that he is so awesome that I dont really care. I do, however, wonder if there are parts missing from the chapter because it doesnt show how Scotch ended up sleeping with Gilda or if the next chapter would be a new episode. Either way, this is a great story and I cant wait for the next chapter.
great chapter, keep it up :)
"Butterscotch nods letting her hand out the vitals."
Either victuals or vittles is the word you want.
Gilda's nice, but I was hoping for some Applejack action.
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Thanks for that, I was really confused on which one I was suppose to use.
Sorry for the lack of Applejack, trying to stick with canon and writing a scene with the two, is kinda hard without having to skip a some events.
You know I really like how different you portray Butterscotch from his usual personality and from Fluttershy. Its hard to believe for me that he is secretly a confident, badass fighter that also serves as the town's best bachelor. Except that he is so awesome that I dont really care. I do, however, wonder if there are parts missing from the chapter because it doesnt show how Scotch ended up sleeping with Gilda or if the next chapter would be a new episode. Either way, this is a great story and I cant wait for the next chapter.
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I forgot to add that this was part 1, part 2 will be up some time by today or tomorrow at the latest.