Life can be quite boring on sweet apple acres. The monotomy of Applejacks life was only broken recently when she met Twilight sparkle and the rest of her friends, but what would a young, lonely mare do between harvesting apples?
I never said i liked it. I don't, I was just giving advice on how to make the story sound more fluent and making the chapters longer at the same time as well.
Are you serious! Incest I'm okay with but Filly Fooling is where I cross the line. And here I just favorited your fic.
Dont know what to say
We were warned in the description.
Still too rushed anyway.
Chapters need to be longer in general.
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While I agree with the sentiment; you realize that you are a silly man, correct?
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Agreed.
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some weirdo's like that crap and some others don't... And I myself hate it more than religion. And I'm not a fan of that too.
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some weirdo's like that crap and some others don't... And I myself hate it more than religion. And I'm not a fan of that too.
I never said i liked it. I don't, I was just giving advice on how to make the story sound more fluent and making the chapters longer at the same time as well.
Okay Really? Don't bring poor little apple bloom into this. Fillies are not okay. No. No more. Also, your still rushing it.
3603955 um, ok.
Really? You're doing this to Applebloom...
This is her when she reads that part------->