....Welp,He's fucked....Also The hell is M.S.?......Im pretty sure you've only said its abreviation

3562684 M.S. is a inflammatory disease called Multiple sclerosis it usually effects the brain and spinal cord it interrupts the communication between a certain area and the brain, and that's all I really know about it.

3562876 Again,Say that in the story or the description,Its a good idea when starting a story to not assume that people know things,But at the same time,Dont assume they are idiots.Id recommend changing the first time its mentioned to its full name,And a quick rundown of what it does,So as to prevent confusion.........Just my recommendation though

3562884 And it shall be so! And thank you.

3562889 Phew,I thought you were gonna be one of those idiots who doesnt know how to respond to a suggestion without getting all pissy about it,Hence me stepping on eggshells in the first comment a bit

3562892 You won't get that from me , I have had that happen to me before, and I don't like those people .

3562897 Thank you for being a sensible person in this situation,You have Earned a bit of my respect

WHY DOES HE GET TO LIVE AND GO TO EQUESTRIA AND MY YOUNGER BRO DOESNT?!?! ITS NOT FAIR

Joking, I like i so far and I hope to see it blossom into a wonderful story.

3563048 Oh shit, don't do that! You nearly gave me a heart attack but thank you anyways I hope you enjoy it. now, whew give me a minute I have to recover.