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While the setting seems interesting, I was put off by the few grammatical errors I spotted. I suggest getting a pre-reader before you publish any new chapters.
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If you would be so kind could you point out some of the errors, I'd really like to know exactly where I'm going wrong.
Cool start to the story, a few mistakes I can easily live with. I'm Tracking but I question if the mature tag is needed for this. I mean if it's going to get more cloppy later on then fair enough, but the explicit scene here could easily be removed and would have no effect on the storyline.
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The next chapter has two clop scenes so far (in 10,000 words), so I think it will be needed.
3409862 fair enough. Heres hoping the next chapters is as good as the first.