Chapter 10: WHY?
Twilight's breath was slow and rhythmic. Her head was swinging forwards and backwards again and again, never stopping for a moment. It made her feel better, it was comforting. It almost reminded her of the comfort of a crib, that swings from side to side. The motion was so repetitive. There was nothing new she had to face, nothing undesired. There was nothing that could disturb her right now. The slow wind rushed through the leaves in the trees, causing the same rustling noise as for the last hours. It felt so good not having to do a thing in the world, just swinging forwards and backwards. A tear was running down from her left eye. She didn't want to think of a reason for that tear. It was all okay now that she could comfortably swing back and forth.
She had given up long ago. There was no way to succeed, nopony to help her through. How was she supposed to survive this? She broke out in sobbing again. Why? Why? Why? That question would never leave her mind nor would the images. No, don't think about it, Twilight! She intensified to swinging, causing slight nausea. It was still better than remembering. A cold breeze ran over her long hair that was cluttered and filled with specks of dirt and dust. How long had she been sitting here? It didn't matter. Back and forth. Such a calming motion. Her teeth clenched together as the memories tried to regain the control over her body. She forced her eyes shut, trying to forget it all. Just back and forth, back and forth.
Back and fourth, back and fourth.
Another tear ran down her eyes, even though she had already thought there were no tears anymore. Her mouth was dry and her belly was empty, but did that even matter? Maybe death would give her answers for the questions she searched to forget. There were no answers to be found. There were no answers for those questions at all. Why? She would have cried if she would have had the strength to do it. She was done with the world and the world was done with her. Why?
She forced herself to look up again, although the water in her eyes made it hard to see. She looked down again. She could not stand it. Tears fell from her eyes as if she had not cried enough already. She began panting for air again as so often before.
"WHY?!"
She screamed and yet no pony heard. No pony was there to hear. Her body fell to the side but there was no impact, no pain. Only this loneliness. This anger. This sadness. This different type of pain. Her sobbing turned into crying again. Why? The memories were flooding her brain again like the dam holding them back had broken apart. She was too weak to hold them back. The Canterlot Castle, in ruins. The lifeless bodies. Why? The slow walk through this infinite field filled with death. The whole world had died, the stars had stopped twinkling, the darkness filled the world. Why? She had found them, not long after.
Stop it Twilight! You can't! You can't think about it! Just forget it all! Just... The pain would kill her. Why? There is nothing in this world even closely related to losing who we loved. She had not only lost one, but all. This world was not a place to live in anymore. She forced herself up, trying to contain the tears but they just kept coming. Right before her were the graves, all six of them. Behind them, six more graves. She decided to speak last words to everypony before the inevitable would happen.
She had tried to go back, of course. There had been no way. The slightest idea of traveling back to a better time already threw her back into the ruins, into the field of death. With each and every try to go back, she had been forced back into the field of death. She had not given up. She was strong and yet so weak. It had been reset 777 when she had given up. There was only death in this world. Only death. Why?
She stopped again, being reminded of every single face. Every single empty expression screaming the same question at her:
"Why? Why, Twilight? Why have you done this?"
Every single pony had screamed at her, their eyes ripping her very soul apart. Why? She was too weak to continue thinking about it. She had lost track of time after the thousandth reset. It had been more than a month and she had given it all up. There was no way out of this insanity. Why?
The first grave she arrived at was Fluttershy's. Her grave was filled with Narcissusi. She had found it matching to give her this flower of beauty and sleep. Fluttershy had always been a Narcissus.
"Goodbye, Fluttershy! It... It... You..."
She could not do this. She hated herself for that inability to speak up, but she just couldn't do it. It was hurting her. She cringed with every step, but she couldn't do it. She stumbled over her own legs, falling down again. "Why Twilight? Why did you leave us?" Why?
It had been nothing but her own fault. All along, it had been her own fault.
She tried to scream, but nothing came out. She could not do this. How was she supposed to do this? She was just a pony. Why? She couldn't answer that question. That one action, that one single mistake had taken her life. She hated herself for the inability to do anything. She hated herself for what she had done. She hated herself for everything. This was her own fault.
Why? It may already be too late.
This wasn't her own fault… Yes, yes! This was... This was somepony's fault, but not her own. No no. She giggled. Her breathing was fast and discontinuous. This was the answer to all her problems: It was all PAST Twilight's fault. That foolish pony had ruined everything. Yes yes. That foolish pony had to be stopped. She would stop that foolish pony and everything would be just fine. She would stop past Twilight and everything would be fine, yes yes. She turned around again.
“Fluttershy!”
Another breeze of wind hushed over the surface of the grave, blowing away the narcissi. Twilight felt cold, but she would…
“What are you saying Fluttershy?”
She was sure, she had heard her. Fluttershy had just spoken to her. If Fluttershy had only been a little bit louder...
"Come on Fluttershy, speak up!"
Silence. Only shadows of the clouds above her running over the ground. A breeze of wind and rustling of leaves. Why wasn’t Fluttershy answering?
“Answer Fluttershy! Please!”
Oh, Fluttershy wants to go the hard way. Then she will show her the hard way! Yes yes, the hard way. With a single swipe of her magic, the grave was taken apart. The dirt sprayed into the air, revealing her hideous friend. She was alone here with Fluttershy. The whole world around them didn’t matter anymore.
“You have lost your hair, Fluttershy. I still think you are beautiful. Yes yes. Very beautiful.”
Fluttershy refrained to answer. Why was she not answering?!
“Fluttershy, talk to me!”
Oh, you are not going to answer? Twilight will make you answer. Everything would be normal. Yes yes, Fluttershy will answer. Twilight chuckled as she thought about it. This time, the skeleton answered, but the answer wasn’t something she wanted to hear. No no. It wasn’t her fault.
“It wasn’t my fault! Do you hear me?! IT WASN’T MY FAULT!”
Her heart started beating faster and faster and what was left of Fluttershy was staring at her. No no, into her soul. Fluttershy was judging her. She wouldn’t allow Fluttershy to judge her, no no. With a flash of her magic, the skeleton evaporated into thin air. Her eyes were blinded for a moment, but it had been worth it. Yes yes, Fluttershy would no longer judge her. Yes yes.
The leaves of the tree started rustling again and the grass was blowing softly in the autumn breeze. They had seen her do it. The tree had seen her. And the tree would tell Celestia. And the grass would tell Celestia. Yes yes, they would rat on her. Would she allow it? No no, she wouldn’t. The grass and the tree would have to die. And the others too. No pony would squeal on her. NOPONY!
After having done the necessary, she traveled back through time. She had done that thousands and thousands of times before, always without success. Today, however, she was a different pony. One that could do anything, yes yes. Anything. It was Ponyville, yes yes. However, she couldn't show her self. No no. There was past Twilight, but she couldn't show herself. No no, she couldn't. She made her way up to that place.
There was one mare who could help her. The mare in the moon. Yes yes, That place. The moon. Yes yes. Here she would find her. Yes yes. The mare would do what she was not able to. Yes yes. The mare would kill that nasty pony. She was no murderer! It wasn’t her fault! It wouldn’t be her fault in the future! The mare would do it. It will be the mare’s fault, not hers. The mare would kill past Twilight; yes yes.
"Who hath come to our lair? Thou art doomed upon coming here. Eternal night shall reign once again!”
A deep laughter echoed through the empty space.
"No, no. I am here to aid in your escape. Yes, yes. The stars have sent me to aid in your escape. Yes, yes."
"Who art thou, foolish mare? For Nightmare Moon is who you have awoken."
"I don't have a name. No no."
She giggled. She once has had a name, but that name had lost all of it's meaning. Yes yes. She used her magic to free this bitter mare. Nightmare Moon would kill her.
"Foolish mare. Thou hath freed me once and for all. The time for my reign hath cometh."
A deep laughter howled through the empty space. And she giggled. Yes yes. She liked giggling, yes yes.
No no. It has not worked, no no. Nightmare Moon has failed. The dragon, whose original home she had destroyed, has given up. The parasprites, who she had driven into the Everfreeforest, have been captured by that pesky pink pony. Yes yes, pesky. Even the hydra who she had angered and beaten for days had not had a chance against past Twilight. She almost spit out that 'T'. Yes yes, spit. There had been others, trying the same... A cockatrice, diamond dogs, buffaloes. Things she had not planned but also had failed to stop those six. They were hard to stop, yes yes. Nonetheless, she would stop them anyway; yes yes. She giggled.
A thought slowly crawled up into her brain, the memories of what had once been her… It was time to bring forth other creatures, creatures like Discord. Creatures that would have a chance at defeating them. Yes yes. It was the third day already, on which she was just cowering there, waiting for somepony to approach that statue. Instead of it being somepony useless, as so many times before, this time there were perfect targets. Yes yes: Three little fillies arguing about the definition of Discord. She used her magic, quietly and with determination. Slowly, she weakened the spell containing Discord inside of this stone shell. Discord would be free. Yes yes, free. They would not know what hit them. Past Twilight would finally have to give up. Yes yes, give up. She giggled again.
“Ahh! What a wonderful day to spread chaos once again!”
"Yes yes, it is. Yes yes. Spread your chaos, Discord. Spread your chaos and destroy that pony! Yes yes, chaos."
"Oh, and who are you, my insane subject? Insanity is such a wonderful thing, isn’t it?"
He burst out in streamers and balloons and she giggled. Yes yes. He was a master of chaos.
"I have no name. No no."
"Oh, isn't that a wonderful coincidence? I have no name either!"
She giggled. Yes yes. This one would make everything just fine.
It was time! Yes yes, it was time. He had failed. It had been going so well. Yes yes, so well. She had almost done it if there had not been that damn dragon. Yes yes, that dragon. Pesky little thing. There had to be pesky little things all the way ruining the possibility for success. Yes yes. She couldn't let that continue. No no, she couldn't.
"What are you doing in my lair? Get her, my children."
"No no. I am not here to fight with you. No no, not fighting."
The shield she had created was holding the changelings off her as long as it was necessary. It had been a long search, but she finally found a suitable replacement for Discord. She would not only send one, but two problems for past Twilight to deal with. Yes yes. She would send two. Yes yes, two were better than one.
"What do you want, then?"
"I want to give you the Crystal Empire, the love of their citizens. A whole empire to feed upon. Yes yes, an empire. I want you to kill her for me. Yes yes."
"The whole empire? Who do you think, I am? I am not a fool! I am the Queen of the Changelings."
"Yes yes, you are. Yes yes. I know who you are. You are Chrysalis. You don't seem to know who I am. No no, you don't."
"Indeed. That is a dilemma. So what is your name? I would like to know it, so I can tell who I destroyed."
"No no. I don't have a name, no no."
She giggled. This queen was stubborn, but she would get her to do what she wanted. Yes yes, she would.
"Pah!"
She started channeling her magic, but Twilight knew, what she had to do.
"Silence!"
It was her royal Canterlot voice. Yes yes. She had learned that from that pony. Yes yes, she had learned it.
"The Crystal Empire will be free for your entry and only yours at the dawn of the next day. Be there and have the possibility to feed your children or starve together with them. It is your decision. Yes yes, it is your decision."
It wasn't her decision. No no. The children would starve. Yes yes, starve. The queen would have no choice but coming. Yes yes, no choice. She had already prepared it all. Queen Chrysalis would have an easy game. Yes yes, easy. And Twilight would try and fail. Yes yes. She giggled.
It made her insane. Yes yes, insane. How could everypony fail at her command? It was an easy command: Getting rid of Twilight Sparkle. Yes yes, so easy. The queen has been beaten by the power of love that she had been eating up all along. Yes yes, how ironic. It would have still worked, if this stubborn King would have awoken faster. Yes yes, stubborn little thing. The ice had been thicker than she had expected. The magic had been stronger. Yes yes, strong magic. It were four days without eating or drinking or sleeping. No no, no eating. It had been four long days of an exhausting use of magic. Yes yes, exhausting. Now it was time. The deep laughter coming from below was the first sign of his awakening. Yes yes. He was finally awake. Yes yes.
"The time for vengeance has come!"
The King erupted through the ground without her being able to say anything. No no, not able. That being was filled with hatred. Yes yes, pure hatred. It would most definitely destroy past Twilight. Yes yes. This would be the final blow. Yes yes, finally. She thought about it for a moment and giggled. That pony had been right:
It is already too late.
And she liked it.
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First of all: Hello
Secondly: Finally somebrony, who actually understands, what I wrote
Yes, it does. It makes her extremely sensitive to magic and I would be sure, that she could find those tasty crystals just as good as Rarity
Okay, here is my idea of magic in Equestria: There is magic all around in Equestria, not only concentrated in ponies (There is natural magic, magic in zecora, magic in timberwolfes) and you learn (or inhibit) how to control it.
The horn serves as a detector of the magic and with the horn, unicorns can detect and use the magic. Increasing the potency of the detectors does not only help them to sense fine magic, but also an overall bigger amount. Usually with big amounts of magic, the receptors get overstimulated and the unicorns cannot control it, thus resulting in their spell eventually failing. With that potion however, it makes the receptors potent enough to resist the over-stimulation of using too much magic.
So using the magic, which is required for casting bigger spells becomes easier to access, not meaning it would be easier to use or easier to understand. The spells still have to be learned and trained an exceptional amount of times, but I am sure, Twilight already handled that problem
Oh, not only electricity, but also physics, biology and chemistry. You know why? Because those sciences only describe what is happening in our world. With magic and enough knowledge and training (we are speaking about Twilight here
) it should be possible for a pony to do most things, that we know of. Like creating electric currents, stimulating a certain reaction or ... charging batteries, which is nothing but reversing a certain electricity-generating chemical reaction inside of the battery.
Yep, it supports it all. Magic is really nothing but the smart use of the energy around us to our advantage. Some may say, what we humans do is very similar to magic. Imagine talking to a human from thousands of years ago:
What do you have there?
Well, a magical device, that let's me communicating with humans all over the giant world, which is a globe flying around a giant gas cloud, that continuously burns, and creating electromagnetic wave signals, that are sent to flying metal bodies in outer space, where we also landed on our moon with those metal thingies.
Yep, they would either think, you were the greatest magician of all times or think, you were completely stupid.
Coming from a field of science, it was my "job" to create a reasonable explanation for magic and there you have it
Ponies however, can use the energy around us much more efficient and manipulate it over greater distances. They are quantum-entangled with the universe making it possible for them to do such stuff.
I could write entire novels, how magic is indeed scientifically possible
However, this is fimfiction, so I didn't feel like writing extra 20 paragraphs just to explain the origin of magic in Equestria.
What would you say, should I write such an origin? (Of course, easier to understand than what I wrote here
)
Html doesn't work here (I tried, too
), however, there are some possibilities on top of your comment box, like posting a link, a picture, a video, quoting, changing color, writing bold italic and underlined and crossed through and also changing the font size.
Thank you VERY much for reading and have a nice day.
It's nice to meet somebrony, who understood that science stuff
If you are going to continue on reading, you are going to find yourself in a different world though, so be warned
With best regards,
Dream Whisper
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And yes, I read your story and I found it worthy to be liked
A big yay for party time
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Oh, I hope it doesn't ruin the fun while reading?
Where exactly are you now / were you when you wrote that comment. Got to trace it all back with scientific accuracy
I hope, the twists and turns of this story can still catch you
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Hello again!
I'm on my phone right now. Ill have to play with all the buttons when I find a computer.
"The horn serves as a detector of the magic and with the horn, unicorns can detect and use the magic."
Hm. That would probably mean that a horn could theoretically be biologically implemented.
But...
Nopony has ever succeeded. I'm almost certain some have tried (Trixie?), but to no avail. Does this mean allicororns exist on a different plane, or have a different level of awareness, possibly? If that were true, getting to the state of being an allicorn, would require a monumental amount of magic. [SPOILER ALERT]
Possibly, in the season 3 finally, Twilight generated enough magical energy with Star Swirl's spell, to 'jump' to an allicorn's level. If there are two planes of magic, this would explain how Luna and Celestia have so much abundant power, having access to a whole new level of energy!
" Increasing the potency of the detectors does not only help them to sense fine magic, but also an overall bigger amount. Usually with big amounts of magic, the receptors get overstimulated and the unicorns cannot control it, thus resulting in their spell eventually failing. With that potion however, it makes the receptors potent enough to resist the over-stimulation of using too much magic"
Interesting. Resist, or be utterly immune?
"Oh, not only electricity, but also physics, biology and chemistry. You know why?
Because those sciences only describe what is happening in our world."
Makes sense. Like with gravity, magic could have some sort of magnetic attraction. Hell, matter itself could be some condensed form of energy.
If unicorns couldn't detect or manipulate said energy, they would have to surround an object with less dense magic, allowing it to float.
With this potion however, Twilight may be able to manipulate matter itself, rearranging atoms, or possibly even deforming them.
Atomic detonations could be from this dense energy expanding, creating copious amounts of heat!
" Yep, they would either think, you were the greatest magician of all times or think, you were completely stupid."
Or a God. This had actually happened before in real life!
This makes me curios though. Do you think ponies evolved over time, and slowly became accustomed to magic?
" Coming from a field of science"
Uh oh. Did you use a calculator for '306'? O.o
" They are quantum-entangled with the universe making it possible for them to do such stuff."
Either I'm misinterpreting chapter 10, or Twilight may have 'come loose', and is now drifting through time/existence. Yes yes?
" I could write entire novels, how magic is indeed scientifically possible"
I'm not trying to persuade you to do so, but I would love to read them! Your a lot smarter than I expected. At first I thought you were just going to reply with "Umm... Sure?" Nice to meet you ^_^
" What would you say, should I write such an origin? (Of course, easier to understand than what I wrote here )"
I would definitely read it! I love over-thinking simple things, like a cartoon, with talking ponies. (THEIR ANATOMY IS HORRID FOR SPEAKING! I think magic is involved in talking too.)
" If you are going to continue on reading, you are going to find yourself in a different world though, so be warned"
Oh no! (Hehe, I already have suspicions as to what it is)
Thank you for having the patience to read all this, and my story! :)
-[EDIT]-
I did it! I made a time 'machine'! I still have some bugs to work out though.
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I did it! I made a time 'machine'! I still have some bugs to work out though.
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I did it! I made a time 'machine'! I still have some bugs to work out though.
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" Oh, I hope it doesn't ruin the fun while reading? "
Naw, this story has me hooked ;)
" Where exactly are you now / were you when you wrote that comment. Got to trace it all back with scientific accuracy
I hope, the twists and turns of this story can still catch you"
Right at the beginning when I read " Ponykind would be forever safe." I immdiatly knew that there would be some sort of war with the other species, either out of jealousy or abuse of power. Along with other (correct) theories.
When I posted that I had just finished 7.
I'm still surprised at a lot of things. Didnt expect what happened at the beginning, or middle of 10 AT ALL WHATSOEVER.
I think I can predict a few things because the story story was falling into place, and I saw where the pieces went. Don't worry.
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I think, Alicorns do not have another type of magic, but are just more keen in it. Did you realize, that all Alicorn's horns are bigger than usual unicorn ones? The reason for that is more receptors being able to sit on a longer horn...
I think, it was Celestia lifting / helping Twilight to get on that level, less Twilight's own success
That is actually an interesting idea. Resist is what I have written about, but the ability to use infinite magic? That would be told in another story...
EXACTLY. However, there is one problem to it. Remember, how I told you about the receptors? They cannot sense infinitely fine magic. Their sensing is limited. They cannot sense the little atoms and that is why they can't create atomic explosions. Now, however, Twilight could do this after drinking the potion...
I don't actually know. That is quite an interesting question. One could argue, that those ponies are a creation of some kind of god-pony, but they could also be evolved animals maybe even from right this time. There is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much possibility to write about how ponies could have evolved, I could write the whole history of Equestria down, but who would read it (except for you, ofc
)?
Yes. Being a physicist doesn't make you a mathematician
Haha, no I am sorry. No no, you have misinterpreted. It is just insanity, that finally stop creeping up on her and finally caught her.
It is definitely a pleasure to meet you.
As I stated above: If I could be sure, bronies would read those, I would write them.
Just what I said above...
Hmm...
Hmm...
I don't know. The 'unsure' is killing me. Am I going to write the history? Am I? Celestia help me with this decision...
If you carefully read my story, you are going to (possibly?) realize, how I think about this conundrum.
When you travel back through time, can you actually make decisions?
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YAY!
Get captian hook and the lost boys out and ... oh wait... isn't this peter pan? This is fimfiction? Darmn. Then let us throw a Pinkie-Pie-Party
Okay. That is actually quite smart of you. Only some bronies would have detected that. I know, it was a bit overzealous with that term, but I wanted you to know, that there was going to come a change, of course
It was a hook, I was laying out to catch the readers... And well, some of them, I have hooked
YES! That is what I had wanted to do
I always want to create twists, that ponies don't expect. Don't you worry, there will be another one.
Regards, Dream Whisper
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"Did you realize, that all Alicorn's horns are bigger than usual unicorn ones? The reason for that is more receptors being able to sit on a longer horn..."
Ooooooooooooooooooooooh!
I assumed it was because of their larger bodies. That's a great way to look at it.
That gave me the funny idea of an 'extension horn'.
"I could write the whole history of Equestria down, but who would read it (except for you, ofc )?"
Well, would you enjoy writing it?
" Haha, no I am sorry. No no, you have misinterpreted. It is just insanity, that finally stop creeping up on her and finally caught her."
Alright, ill re-read chapter 10 with that in mind.
" I don't know. The 'unsure' is killing me. Am I going to write the history? Am I?
Celestia help me with this decision..."
Again, would you ENJOY writing it? As long as it doesn't get in the way of anything of course.
" If you carefully read my story, you are going to (possibly?) realize, how I think about this conundrum."
I think I do. At first I was doubting, but as I read on it made more sense.
" When you travel back through time, can you actually make decisions?"
In essence, yes. However from third pony view, no. It would seem as if you're doomed to repeat it, but I think of it this way:
You are walking down a sidewalk, when a future you appears, says "What?" Then leavs. 10 years later, you are sent back in time, you say "what?", then you go back.
Because you have the exact same thought process, you cannot say/do anything different.
My theory: You cannot alter the past, or future, in any way. If you think you have, you will find out that it happened anyway, or will happen anyway. You made the exact same choice as the past or future you made, which led up to the events that caused you to go back/forward in the first place, therefore making your attempt at "Changing the past/future" useless.
Your interpretation of time is very interesting however, and had me pondering for a bit.
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"YAY! Get captian hook and the lost boys out and ... oh wait... isn't this peter pan? This is fimfiction? Darmn. Then let us throw a Pinkie-Pie-Party"
Fimfiction or Peter Pan, you can count on me to come along for the ride!
" YES! That is what I had wanted to do"
You did it very well ;)
Do you have an editor?
(in Dream-Whisper-story)
"Having said that, it would probably be the wisest to just look for an editor next time and try to shove my story up his *** and see, what comes out of his mouth"
[read in Fluttershy's voice]
Umm... Im hesitant with the methods, but I could edit. Engrish is, one, my spesialtees.
It'd be away to keep in touch, which I would like. It's rare to find people like you these days.
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Darn you, you got me. Okay, I am going to write it. I would love writing it. You are right. I should really write what I love, not what would get famous
I am most definitely going to write it
That's what I wanted to do
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Yes yes, that formulation was a bit harsh, wasn't it? Those three stars can imply a lot of things, can't they? Yes yes, imply
As my editor, you would not only have to watch "how thou English art pronounced", but also general story-technical mistakes. You would have to make me think about my own words, which you did obviously. You would also have to get along with this style of writing. I know, not everybrony can get along with it. No no, not everybrony
Best examples for my writing style getting weird are those passages like the insane Twilight one, extreme malfunctions in emotion or "THOU ROYAL VOICE ART USED ONCE AGAIN".
Did I scare you with those requirements? I hope not
So, if you really feel up to the task, you can most certainly do it.
Oh, stop it you
Yes, why thank you.
Errrmmm... okay
Did.. did your time machine break again?
Damn it, I told you not to use that one again...
Fluttershy bonus
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"Darn you, you got me. Okay, I am going to write it. I would love writing it. You are right. I should really write what I love, not what would get famous"
Great! I'm looking forward to reading them! It'd be nice to figure out how to watch someone. I think id have to get on a computer and figure it out...
" I am most definitely going to write it"
Like I said above :)
" As my editor, you would not only have to watch "how thou English art pronounced", but also general story-technical mistakes. You would have to make me think about my own words, which you did obviously. You would also have to get along with this style of writing. I know, not everybrony can get along with it. No no, not everybrony
Best examples for my writing style getting weird are those passages like the insane Twilight one, extreme malfunctions in emotion or "THOU ROYAL VOICE ART USED ONCE AGAIN"."
Considering I (Usually) understand what's going on, the emotions, etc., I think I may be up to the task!
P.S. Don't forget commas X(
P.P.S. You're going to have to teach he how to do the underlining, bold, and italics things.
" It's rare to find people like you these days."
Mmhm :)
" It's rare to find people like you these days."
Uh oh... I didn't type that...
" It's rare to find people like you these days."
Did I type these?? I get a headache whenever I attempt to
Did I type these?? I get a headache whenever I attempt to
Did I type these?? I get a headache whenever I attempt to