Alright, tell me what you think. This is my first fiction ever (barring a few creative writing exercises in English class during Middle School), I admit I don't entirely know what I'm doing, so if you have any critiques or suggestions please lay them out in the comments, or send a message to my account. Thank you.

Moar

Mind making flash do the exact thing twilight does to him in later chapters?

So this is how S&M works... Okay then.

Behold, Princess Twilight Sparkle, the Meanie.