Well my advice may differ depending on what your goal is if you are just going with just a bunch a short stories where the whole focus is clop then I think your doing fine you kinda jump a little fast in the story but that may be something that is intentional if you REALLY want me to look at it I could I'm just not sure what direction Your going is all
Well my advice may differ depending on what your goal is if you are just going with just a bunch a short stories where the whole focus is clop then I think your doing fine you kinda jump a little fast in the story but that may be something that is intentional if you REALLY want me to look at it I could I'm just not sure what direction Your going is all
That was pretty good. Keep it going.