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Great story! I have to admit, you're great with twists and turns.
What is the significance of that big marble slab? Why is it so important to Rainbow Dash?
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It's not the slab itself, but what it's doing.
I know people (myself included, in retrospect) who have wanted to do something, but then subconsciously sabotaged themselves, making whatever they need to do much more difficult, giving them a pass or excuse not to do it, if that makes any sense. By holding on to something big and awkward she doesn't really have the room for, she doesn't realistically have the room for anything (or any pony) else.
Where there's a will, there's a way, though... as clichéd as that sounds ^^
I apologize for the SIZABLE BLACK CUT but I don't want to potentially spoiling anything since we're talking character motivation
Peace
*finishes* Dang, I was hoping for zombies.
And I kind of expected Rarity's gift to be a stuffed version of Sweetie Belle.
I also have to ask.. why did the Cakes help set up a competing bakery/eatery like, 50 feet away? Are they trying to emulate Starbucks? Or is it going to be spun into Pinkie's Party Palace? Will there be skeeball?
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Thanks for reading!
Nope, no zombies. Not the direction I plan to take this story in, but very fun idea all the same
I also have to ask.. why did the Cakes help set up a competing bakery/eatery like, 50 feet away?
It's not really a competing bakery, just a branch. It's a chance to blossom for Pinkie. If still it seems like an oversight or that it could backfire in the future, please consider that MLP's universe is a bit romanticized -- they're helping a young pony grow and being proud of her accomplishments. Togetherness and growth through adversity... quite possibly a couple of my favorite themes in the series ^^
Peace
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So thats a no on skee ball?
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I can neither confirm nor deny any skee bally goodness.
She's just starting off, so anything is possible. In the future Cheese Sandwich may show up to help her and their establishment would then be called "Cheesy Pink." It would not do very well, unfortunately, due to ponies misinterpreting the name of the shop as a double entendre. Even though Pinkie can sing in English and Spanish, and has several ponies to guide her with less innocent minds, she can't help making a silly decision every now and again... afterall, she's Pinkie!
But all that's not for a while yet... probably another story all together
That was all in good fun now
Peace
This... was a great story. I wish it would continue, but it seems over. It really was a great read and had me captivated for quite awhile! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks for the comment!
It's not quite over. Each of the surviving CMC is going have her own part after part 4.
4361445 Well... that was a quick reply... hmm... Oh well. I can't really dwell upon that. Glad to hear it's going to continue though!