I find myself on a bit of a roll with this story.

WARNING: There is vague reference to events upcoming in Season 5's opening. However, I know about as much as you do, so the spoilers shouldn't be too bad.

Initially, I didn't think anything of it. But several people have made some good points about Twilight's foul language, attitude, and emotional state going all over the place. While I won't be changing the first chapter, I will be making a plot point about it in future chapters of Crusade's End.

Anyway, just wanted people to know. Thank you for the constructive criticism, it's given me GREAT ideas on how to improve the story.

New story posted!

Check it out and tell me what you think. It's called Crusade's End

The idea occurred to me recently and I had to write it down...