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Feb
24th
2016

Hello. I'm not dead, and niether are any of my stories. · 3:53am Feb 24th, 2016

Hey, guys, sorry for the drought in new chapters, especially for What I've Done and A Hiss in the Dark. I know a lot of you have been looking forward towards my new chapters for those stories, but I have a reason for my lameness.

Namely that I've been experiencing a writer's block so dense, it has its own planets orbiting it.

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Sep
20th
2015

So... here you go. · 8:49am Sep 20th, 2015

Next chapter, hope you guys like it.

Sorry, just a bit low on self esteem after this one. Please excuse the ramblings at the bottom of the chapter.

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May
1st
2015

Well, I suppose this was to be expected... · 3:49pm May 1st, 2015

So, the next chapter of The Nautilus Protocol is ready, but it has problems.

Actually, Its been ready for several months now, but when I went back to it, I couldn't help but feel that it is complete crap, though I'm currently too tired to spot why that is.

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Apr
30th
2015

Edits to Nautilus Protocol, as well as news about the next few chapters. · 6:48pm Apr 30th, 2015

Well, since my promise to publish another chapter I've been going through the previous ones for this story to remind myself of where we've been and what we've accomplished, and I have got to say that my previous work is littered with errors and rough writing. I've made a few edits here and there, nothing major, just enough to improve readability. Also, I've cut a bit out of Jaleth's pity party in chapter III, making it more implied then explicitly stated. Still making edits though, not to

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Apr
23rd
2015

Expect an end to the hiatus! · 9:52pm Apr 23rd, 2015

Well, I think I've finally figured out what I need to do, so expect a bunch of new chapters soon! However, fair warning: The new chapters are there to fulfill the deficiencies of my previous ones, so they will be in some weird places, which will require a little bit of rereading.

In an effort to minimize your confusion, I will post in a future blog post where the new chapters are going to be. Be warned, however, that my next update will be of mega proportions!

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Feb
2nd
2015

Sorry. · 3:35pm Feb 2nd, 2015

Sorry about the previous blog post, my bad. I think I have what I need.

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Jan
30th
2015

Hiatus. · 12:59am Jan 30th, 2015

Well, I've been talking with my editor, and we both agree that there is a bit of a problem with The Nautilus Protocol. I'm still working on it, don't get me wrong, but until I figure out the problem, this story is going to go on hold.

I may go back and rewrite some of the more recent chapters, but for now, I'm putting this story on hold until I'm able to figure the problem out.

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Jan
29th
2015

New Chapter, and some waiting for the next one. · 9:12pm Jan 29th, 2015

So, the next chapter is up, before my editor had a chance to look at it. I still have one more chapter waiting to go, but you won't see it until he does. Its the one with all the bombshells in it, and if I'm going to get hit with the rage of all of my readers, I want to make sure it's good and ready.

That being said, its still in editing. If you want a sneak peak, however, to help with the editing process, go ahead and PM me and let me know!

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Jan
27th
2015

I worry. · 3:43pm Jan 27th, 2015

I worry that I may have lost a lot of my readers for The Nautilus Protocol due to my long hiatus caused by my writers block. To any of my fans who also write, has this kind of thing happened to you? and how were you able to win back your readers?

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Jan
27th
2015

Mwuahahahah! · 12:23am Jan 27th, 2015

so... NEW CHAPTER!

Anyway, as to my surprise, I have three whole other chapters ready, they just need to go through the long, rigorous process called editing (AKA, you'll see them by this time next week).

One of them is quite beefy not only in terms of story, but also wordcount. It weighs in at an impressive 7000 words!

What I'm trying to say, is:

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Jan
25th
2015

Um... wow... · 2:59pm Jan 25th, 2015

So, yeah. This surprise is just getting bigger and bigger, but I cannot release it yet. I'm still waiting on my editor, so you are going to have to wait for him to finish.

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Jan
23rd
2015

So, yeah. Expect a bit of a surprise... · 12:28am Jan 23rd, 2015

So, I have a surprise for you guys, but you're going to have to wait for my editor to get back to me. I don't want to spoil things for you, but lets just say that good things come in twos.

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Jan
18th
2015

Next Chapter! HUZZAH! · 10:38am Jan 18th, 2015

Well, after months and months of waiting, I've finally finished the next chapter to The Nautilus Protocol. I intend to make this a regular occurrence as well, so expect more chapters soon.

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Nov
25th
2014

Um... Oops... · 5:34pm Nov 25th, 2014

So, I just realized that I was using the name of someone else's OC in this story, so I changed his name to something else. The character in question is Captain Steel Song, and he originally appeared in Viking ZX's The Dusk Guard. I sincerely apologize to him for accidentally ripping him off, and I hope you guys can forgive me as well.

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Nov
24th
2014

Sneak Peek! · 9:30pm Nov 24th, 2014

So, I'm still waiting for my prereader, so I'm going to post the link to the next chapter and the password here. Basically, I really liked the idea that Oxyaction suggested where I release a chapter for beta, and you guys get to tell me what I'm doing that is ruining my story.:pinkiehappy:

Remember that everything here is subject to change, and if you have suggestions, do not hesitate to post them in the comments below.

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Nov
24th
2014

New chapter for The Nautilus Protocol! · 3:52pm Nov 24th, 2014

Just so you guys know, I've completed my next chapter for The Nautilus Protocol. It is currently being reviewed by my prereader, so you're going to have to wait just a little bit longer before you get to see it.

On a side note, I'm going to be finishing the last few chapters of What I've Become soon. That doesn't mean that that story is finished by a long shot, it just means that that particular arc is finished, and I'll be writing a sequel real soon. Keep an eye out for it!

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Oct
2nd
2014

EDIT to The Nautilus Protocol. · 9:13pm Oct 2nd, 2014

So, in preparation to writing a new chapter for The Nautilus Protocol, I went through my previous chapters and tried to remove all of my previous errors.

Let me tell you, those first few chapters really showed my previous inexperience.

Anyway, most of the errors that I changed were quite small, but a few need to be noted here:

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Aug
18th
2014

News on The Nautilus Protocol, and a new story! · 11:16pm Aug 18th, 2014

So, after last chapter of the Nautilus Protocol, I've kind of been unable to think of anything else to write. I've had a writers block the size of Mississippi, and I've been unable to crack through it.
Then last night I had a dream. I wrote down what I saw, edited it, then put it up on this site. Should be available to read in a couple of hours, so don't worry about not seeing it immediately.

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Jul
27th
2014

Edit to The Nautilus Protocol! · 11:42pm Jul 27th, 2014

So, I've been talking with Pio286 and I made an edit to the latest chapter of The Nautilus Protocol. I removed the three hour time limit I had put before the arrival of the Dridune fleet.
Once I took the time to think about it, having a time limit really limited(hah) me on how I could continue the story. It also limited how much character interaction I could pack into the story before the fleet arrived.

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Jul
22nd
2014

new chapter! and I'm not dead! · 7:32pm Jul 22nd, 2014

Sup guys! I just finished and posted a new chapter for The Nautilus Protocol!

In other news, I'm getting ready to go back to school, so I won't have quite as much time to write as I usually do. On the flip side, I'll be able to see all my brony friends and get ideas for future chapters!

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