Yes, it's true! At long last, First is revised after my having taken the time to do a couple good and thorough editing passes through it... Two and a half years later, now that I know how to grammar and such.
... Which is the aptly titled "First". Clever, right?
It's been two and a half years since I wrote it. For most of that time, I haven't really had it in myself to re-read it. Every time I think about it, I shy away from it. I tell myself it's old material I don't want to focus on now. I always seem to have an excuse to myself not to look at it.
... And only, what, a couple years or so after getting it featured on Equestria Daily, too. :P
Of course, this is if I ignore the DeviantArt presentation of the story, which is closing in on (but not quite at) 7,000 views, most of which came from a large sudden spike due to that aforementioned EqD exposure.