With this new update on this story of Twilight being trapped on a Video Game, you can see now how far can the errors go. Please tell me what problems you can find in there.

As you heard, my new story consist in Twilight being trapped in a game and being able to interact with the human player, now why? That's the reason I recommend you to read the story. Please tell me your opinions on the comments so I can tell what to improve soon. It took me so much to write this because the more I dived into it, the more I realized how much I had to make this work, I really hope you like this guys.

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