Hello again everyone. I didn't think it'd take this long to finish the rewrites but there were a great many things beyond my control that got in the way of that. Also I stopped twice to write 2 additional chapters which ate up a decent chunk of time. Anyway I don't want to cry at y'all or make excuses. The revisions are done and I hope the whole experience is more enjoyable and most importantly, more consistent.

Hey everyone. To those of you who have noticed the hiatus tag on the story, don't worry I still intend to finish it and this is by no means a silent hiatus into obscurity. Simply put, having gone back and looked at some previous chapters, I've decided that some rewrites are in order. I'll try to keep them from being too drastic but I make no promises. Some of the dialogue I found was...robotic, something I had a character say to only move the plot forward and that makes for little more than a

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