Lament of the Dreamer (Revisions/Rewrite Update)

Hello again everyone. I didn't think it'd take this long to finish the rewrites but there were a great many things beyond my control that got in the way of that. Also I stopped twice to write 2 additional chapters which ate up a decent chunk of time. Anyway I don't want to cry at y'all or make excuses. The revisions are done and I hope the whole experience is more enjoyable and most importantly, more consistent.