Just a little heads up for people who are interested. Sandcroft, one of the writers who generously allowed me to use his work for my story, has updated his story Ungrounded and has now made it to the chapter we both collaborated on two years ago. If you're interested, like I stated, in how the little interaction went between my SI and Lucien went in my chapter

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Well, I went through with it. The omake side chapter for the third volume of Cause and Effect. I honestly was going to make it be a little side fling where Twilight and Discord made fun of the MC while he acted out some fantasies. That quickly went down a different path as I realized that this wasn't really appropriate. That led me come up with this more realistic view of what happens when your still moral enough to realize that you've done something wrong on a major level. I put a sex tag on

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Just a note stating that this last chapter I'm writing is an epilogue chapter so brace yourself for the end. Also with the new 'self-insert' tag in should I add it to my story instead of the 'other' tag for my character or since it's a self aware new character should I just leave it? This would affect the other two stories I wrote as well.

Progress is being made on this chapter, but it is slow. Slow like a sentence a day slow. It feels like pulling teeth right now. I haven't even hit a thousand words on this chapter and since my last update blog I've only written about four hundred words. In other words I've written about four hundred words over the course of one month. That. Is. Terrible. The fact is that while I can feel a wide array of emotions I just don't seem to be capable of writing them all. An impactfully sad

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Two chapter left for Cause and Effect and at this eleventh hour my muse has abandoned me. Why is it now that I have writer's block? Probably has something to do with the fact that I can't write a touching goodbye scene. I hate goodbyes. Hell, the title I'm going to use for this chapter is Can't Say Goodbye. All of this and this is where I can't seem to stick the landing. Friggin' fantastic.

Alright people. A little info time. The next two chapters might take some time. Why do I say this? Because the next two chapters will either make or break this entire damn storyline. I want them done right and I need to make sure that I don't make everyone drop the story despite how the reveals might make someone drop the story anyway. I'm going to need some luck with this.

If you're keeping track on my main page here you'll notice that I'm over 2500 words into the current chapter. Well, what's the problem with that you might ask? Well about three quarters of that of that is me talking about what happened in between this and the last chapter. It's honestly feeling like it's too much.

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I'm almost done with the next chapter, but I should say something real quick. You probably won't like it. Not because it isn't what I had in mind because I did have this in mind after I did a re-draft of this section (Yeah that doesn't sound right to me either). It's because it's kind of turning in a direction that I am not confident that people who are reading this will like. Hopefully people will stick with it because it does tie in with the direction I had initially made when I created the

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Ha. One day as cashier and I managed to get five hundred words taken care of. Still not confident I'm getting Aizen right other than his need to hear his own voice. Guess I'll try and push through it.

Man, only about a hundred and twenty words in this past month. That sucks. I mean, really sucks. I just am stuck on this conversation with Aizen. It is hard to write him for me. I'm working on it... but it is just difficult. I refuse to give up though. I have to tough it out somehow.

First off a quick apology for the last blog I had. Using a gag from t.v. without any context isn't the best idea I've had. Still, I should probably have put more thought into it before posting the thing. For it's part in this, I hereby forego using State Farm Insurance for anything in the future.

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Well, it's happened. Somebody stole my idea. Girl Genius comics to be precise. My idea for cool new eyes has been taken. Pretty much the entire thing except that theirs can't fit inside a human head. Look! Tell me that's not exactly what I did! Ah well, their joke about it was tons better than mine.

Oh man I just wrote out almost all of the next chapter in the last three days. All that's left is the end of it. I wondered if getting to this part would speed up my writing at so far it's holding true. If I can just get this last part done I'll put out the chapter on Sunday. It's more to the fact that I want to catch any mistakes I made as I didn't have this part outlined like the other five worlds. Still, doing good so far.

Finally fixed that motherfu- gah! Anyway, chapter rewrite is finished and with any luck I should have the chapter out within a week. I just need to finish the transitions and that will most likely be it. The whole thing looks better and I miss being able to release new chapters. It doesn't help that my work schedule is utter crap since we have a new HR person writing the schedule to coincide with a reduction in overall payroll hours for everyone. Still... work is work. I need my food, shelter,

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I can't believe I'm going to say this but here it goes...

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I haven't posted anything on my progress for a bit and I felt that anyone who actually reads or follows my story ought to get some info on it. Basically my reasons for taking so long on this are thus: A good deal of my writing is done while doing cashier work at my job. However, budget cuts have forced me to pull double duty on what I do there as have a lot of the workers there. That means while I am getting some down time up there I have had less of it. Another part is that I keep wanting to

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After some consideration I've decided to merge the final two chapters of world 5 together. I think the current chapter was on pace to be too short for my own tastes so it had to be done. Also, world 6, which I now find more ironic considering DBZ apparently is taking place in universe six right now, is shaping up to be my baby. The changes I'm making to the storyboard are taking on a life of their own. I honestly think I'm going to put more in there now than I ought to. We'll see, but it is

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I knew I'd pick up the pace as soon as I got back to work, but even I'm impressed with how much I've written over this weekend. The chapter I'm working on is finished already. Expect that in the next couple of days as soon as I can type it up. It was such a productive weekend that I also wrote out half of the next chapter too. Holy crap! I need production like this all the time!

...That's all.

Yeah, I'm still working on this. I've been off work for the past month for winter break. I honestly do my best writing while working the front at work. I don't get distracted with all kinds of things while there that I do here like gaming and Youtube and porn.

...Moving on...

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Two years and fifty two chapters have gone into this third volume of Cause and Effect. Now with the third arc about two-thirds of the way through I just found something very problematic. The work I've done with the storyboards before I began this and the thoughts I have for this story are now beginning to clash with one another. To be specific, I came up with a new concept for world six that is somewhat different than what I had in the beginning. It isn't going to come into play for a few more

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