I highly encourage critique of my work! I'm not a toddler and won't throw a tantrum. All I ask is that if you take the time to write a comment, good or bad, please pull from my work so I know what you're talking about and can make changes. I'm hear to learn and to pass valuable advise along, so feel free to share what you know, and I will do the same. Thanks so much!

I have uploaded the last chapter. The twist has twisted and our future Luna has learned which way her life will go. It's not simple to have a special talent as important as the ones Sunny Daze and Blue Moon have, and they must live the consequences and adapt if Equestria will ever be founded. I hope you'll like the story, and upvote and comment it, and will encourage me to write more.