Chapter 13 Alllllllllllmost done · 7:50am Dec 22nd, 2017
Working on the last scenes, then go back and finish this small insert, then I can start the reviewing process, and hopefully get this chapter out in the next week.
Working on the last scenes, then go back and finish this small insert, then I can start the reviewing process, and hopefully get this chapter out in the next week.
For anyone who cares to answer:
What is it that you enjoy in the story? And what are you looking for when a new chapter comes up?
The work-rate on part 14 of The Path of the Unforgiven continues apace. Right now the word count stands at 19,233 with just a few small bits to get done before the proofing process begins. I'm not terribly surprised by the size of this one, since there was so much that had to happen in it. Glad I decided before-hand to publish it in two parts for the sake of audience digestibility.
Been a good while. Just want to let it be know that chapter 1 of "Dark Days of the Unforgiven" is nearing completion. It currently stands at 15 1/2-ish thousand words, and looking good.
Plus, I just love a Capella shanties.
Let's kick this long-time-no-see post with some cool new character art I've had commissioned!
CAPTAIN SKORN HIMSELF!
My spriggan, Dail Lachan
In the future, these guys will feature in my story, "The Path of the Unforgiven". The depictions are done by the super sweet and talented Faith-Wolff, Go over to her page and watch her. Not... you know.. in the bad way.. but... press the button...
Crow: "So um, I guess we're ponies now."
With the release of this latest episode of "Tales of the Unforgiven", which comes on the heels of updates to "PotU", "Evil Ways", and a big-ass chapter review of Tarbtano's "The Bridge" chapter, I'm going to step back from doing any heavy writing for a little bit.
Finally! Just finished Chapter 11 of “Path of the Unforgiven”, which means that after some final edits and proofing, I’ll be all set for the December 1st release date of all new chapters!
There will be 5, count’em, FIVE story updates coming at the beginning of the month. Hope you all get something to enjoy out of them.
Swear to god this time.....
I'm almost finished with a new chapter of "Evil Ways", and know roughly how 3 & 4 will go, so, success there. Youse guise can expect ch.2 to drop sometime in the next few days.
I'm also going to update "Tales..." with a new segment of "The Sellsword", which I personally enjoy as a way to explore a darker side of Æclypse.
A of right this second, 10,921 words to the new chapter, and I still have a number of plot points to work through. This will be a big, momentous chapter, with some defining moments. Unfortunately, I won't be able to finish it until probably sometime in July. Like I said, there still stands a few thousand words to get through, and I'll be away from my computer for a great bulk of June, so I literally won't be able to work on it. Then come late June into July, I'll be able to get back to it, but
Well, I've reviewed the 2nd art of the finale, and the epilogue. Both are loaded up on the unpublished state, everything looks good.
So sometime this coming Monday the finale will drop, then the epilogue a few days later.
-Should be up before tonight. Just gotta finish proofing, and scan in my tentative sketch of the Fyre Drake to upload. I wanna finish the drake at some point, it'll just have to be worked on some more.
Hope you guys enjoy the next chapter, "Broken Masks".
For the record, here are a few people I have in mind when thinking of some ponies dialog.
Wanderlust- Brian Bedford as Robin Hood
Prince Æclypse- Michael Fassbender as Stelios
In the course of the Unforgiven Saga, Luna will have a few songs that she sings, and I was wondering which type of voice you guys think would be a better for her.
Alison Krauss-
Loreena McKennitt-
Or Enya-
"Mr. Sandmane, bring me a dream (bung, bung, bung, bung)
Make him the cutest stallion I've ever seen (bung, bung, bung, bung)
Give him two lips like roses and clover (bung, bung, bung, bung)
Then tell him that his lonesome nights are over.
Sandmane, I'm so alone
Don't have nopony to call my own
Please turn on your magic beam
The next chapter of Path of the Unforgiven is done being written, now it enters the editorial phase. In my word processor it stands at 52 pages; 14,183 words, (pre-edit) so this is the longest chapter yet. Hope you guys enjoy it, should be out in the next day or two, depending on other stuff I have to get done.
So I've just finished the rough draft of chapter 1, and am now entering the revision phases. There's a lot of stuff in here that I didn't expect or even think of when I started writing it.
I don't have a timetable for its publishing, there's some work to be done, but now that I have the majority of the work done, it's all riding the break downhill from here.
Hope you guys are ready for a 'monster' of a chapter.