Righty, almost done with my rewrite of My Little Panzers prologue. I wasn't really happy with it, it felt rushed and not particularly well finished. I was eager to get it started and the result wasn't that great. So, I finally sat down a rewrote it. Well, the second half mostly, but it reads a whole lot better I think, not trying to cram so much information in there this time around, leaves me with more to work with later on.

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