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Aug
4th
2015

Tomorrow on the Critique Review... · 2:01pm Aug 4th, 2015

The darkness above, provided by clouds grown ugly with threat of rain, threw carpets of shadow over everything. Rotting grass shivered in the cold as the trees stood in silent sorrow, the winds whispering through their withered branches and becoming mournful songs. Critique’s ear flicked at the creak of a wagon wheel, loosely and desperately hanging onto the remains of a carriage tenanted by crabgrass and insects.

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Aug
12th
2015

Critique Review: Secret Life of Rarity Part 2 (With Guest Reviewer Brony Fife) · 3:38pm Aug 12th, 2015

Okay, god… that was a pleasant break from that. So, where were we?


In our last episode, Rarity wasn’t Rarity and everypony was an idiot. Death happened, and death happened, and then death happened some more. The author simply copypasted the show into the fic, then used a tired cliche twice. And then death happened again and Twilight forgot about it.

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Aug
5th
2015

Critique Review: The Secret Life of Rarity (With Guest Reviewer Brony Fife) · 3:20pm Aug 5th, 2015

Critique: One thing to note about this story before we begin is that the story has to warn us that the author doesn’t condone the actions and that if any author has murderous impulses to seek help.


Fife: Gotta be a responsible author, I guess. “In this story, Fluttershy explodes twice. I do not condone exploding. If you feel like you’re going to explode, it sucks to be you.”

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