Finally, the day has come! It only took, what 2.5 years or so?
In all seriousness, pretty happy. It's not perfect by any means, and I'm probably going to redo half of it in the future, but at least I have something out there. Criticism would be awesome! Lay it on me. If you hate it, tell me about! If you like it, tell me why! Every little bit helps me become a better writer.

Thanks!

Hey, it's great that you're alive
And you're celebrating reaching new heights,
but there are bugs below the rafters sitting in their hive.
They're waiting on a little something to make their worlds alright.

They work all day and you don't at all.
You're just sitting alone at home
because you don't have the courage or the balls
to make something of your rights.

You have 'fragile bones'
you tell yourself as if there were anybody left to listen to excuses made to thin air.

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