RE: Dead By Sunset Edit · 1:35am Jul 6th, 2020
It's done guys. It's still not the cleanest work in the world, but it's far and away closer to my current standard. I've tidied up whole swathes of the paragraph structure, added a few bits, tweaked a few things to keep the canon consistent, but I haven't changed anything to the story itself.
The biggest change was to the third Interlude. I wanted to give the CMC a little more screen time.