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It's an EQG somewhat AU story, set after Fall Formal.

Defeated, dethroned and disoriented, she is still Sunset Shimmer. Student of Celestia, Monster of Canterlot.
Once she destroyed kingdoms, defeated heroes and made monsters cry.
She will rise again.
She just has to do better this time.
To be better.

Don't much care for grammar and punctuation at this point -- I just need someone to read what I got about once a week and give an opinion on flow/characters/whether scenes work or should be deleted.

Atm it's 54k words long, going to on a lower side of novel-length, at about 80-90k

I'm happy to reciprocate for a pre-read/review exchange.

What's the genre going to be? The tone?

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Drama/Political Thriller.
The story is mostly concentrating on Sunset sorting herself out after the EQG defeat, and then re-gaining her power as the Queen of Canterlot High, and there's a bit of a twist ending.

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