TLightning Dust's Third Act

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Slice of Life

After a long stay in the hospital, Lightning Dust decides she and her team need a new approach.

• Alt. Universe
• Rainbow Dash
• Scootaloo
• Spitfire
• Soarin
• Lightning Dust

Pip232 · 11k words  ·  34  0 · 650 views

This story is my current pride and joy and I was hoping I could get some comments on it. How do you like the content and pacing so far? Too slow? Just right? And how do you like the character dynamics so far? Thanks a bunch and have a great day!