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I’m planning on creating a new story with two very dangerous villains, which are related to Celestia and Luna
I got the idea to make it while listening to this

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(Those two are, believe it or not, Celestia and Luna, mutated/evolved)

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Well, it's an interesting premise. What's the plot going to be about though? (In short, of course, don't spoil it all.)

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Celestia and Luna turn evil
That's all I'm revealing

7380774
That's not the plot though, that's just the idea behind it. If you want some extra feedback on the story, you have to hint at what exactly are you going to do with the evil sisters. If you give your readers just the basic idea, they'll just look at it, think that it's either neat or dumb, shrug, and move on to another thread.

Fine
They turn evil, pretend they have died, then mutate into those hyper-alicorns(that's the term I'm giving their new appearances)

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I like to read them when it's released

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That's still the premise, not the plot, I'm afraid. But nevermind.

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I'll be releasing the first chapter today

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