I really hoping to get help with my story, I need it to be proofread badly, it been going on for just over a year now and I cause of my Asperger Syndrome I still miss a number of them.

Here a link to my story and hopefully someone could really help me out to make it a better story for all to enjoy.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/448980/griffon-of-canterlot