I just posted a new chapter for my fic and so far it seems to be getting more dislikes than likes. If there's anything wrong with it, would somebody please tell me? Thank you.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/126683/the-basic-sketch-of-life

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While I personally don't see any MASSIVE issues that should be causing a huge influx of down votes, I can see some issues with both the story itself and the writing in general, most of which are goofs pretty much every new writer makes at least once or twice.

Unfortunately, I'm replying to this from my phone so my response is limited right now, but I'll see if I can't give you some pointers later on. For now though, try not to let it get you down.