Please let me know what you think.

I'm really proud of myself

7551793 It's wonderful. It reminds me of my story Supernova Daybreak where all Equestria burns.

In your picture, I see the very sea evaporating under the extreme heat. The whole sky is ablaze and so too is the ship of survivors who tried to save themselves from the molten land. You really should be proud of yourself. You have a muse on your side and her name is Doom.

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Thanks