this is a mess but i need help flushing out a world build the story is inspired by horizons zero down and few of my favorite stories...

Sweetie belle and the tablet of knowledge,
Pony und panzer, and
Anthropology

basically post-human world stuff resurfacing etc

just need some friends to bounce ideas off of and do a bit of world-building...

7268681
So you are trying to organize everything or get rid of the unnecessary bits?

7268683
bit of both the main focus is humans are gone the old world was lost in magical radioactive fallout that mutated what life remained into what modern ponies think were dino's

the world is ina metal ball orbiting a Dyson sphere and primitive unicorns think they control the sun and moon but in reality they just inadvertently discovered how to control the display (fake sky)

7268794
Uh... okay. Are you asking for an editor or getting an idea out in words?

7268800
bit of both
on the one hoof, I need an editor because of my arrival grammar on the other I could use some help getting the idea out in words (in the sense of a possible description)

7268895
I can make an attempt.

7268929
oh that will help

7268983
Do you have google doc/first chapter for me to view?

7269004
I haven't even started writing just yet in length I have an old story I'm recycling, the first one I ever wrote...

what I do have is this I massive would building file and mlp reference sheet
as for the story.
eham...
sweetie belle is having a rough time with her magic but then she finds herself with an offer she couldn't be more uneasy over

it's not everyday discord decides to take you on as his personal student.

join sweetie as she struggles to uncover her hidden powers and abilities while learning more about magic and where it came from. Who were the precursors? What did the leave behind and what does it have to do with the origin of magic?

will she find her special talent or will ponyville go down in flames?

7269047
Browsed through the Reference Sheet, I guess the CMC's are the main characters?

7269052
almost always write cmc fiction why let the main six have all the adventure^^

plus I want to build a solid foundation for what i write

7269181
Good idea.

7269225
^^