Hello everyone, like the title says I need some help with my story. I've got a story planned were my character becomes the Storm King but I'm already having difficulty writing it out. I have got at least the first couple of chapters planned out for what I want to happen but I'm having difficulty putting that plan into words for not only a story that makes sense to read but has a nice flow to it. Now you all are proberly saying get to the point Judoon, so here it is I need someone to help me edit and translate my idea from dot points to a proper story.
Thank you to anyone that can help

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what transformation item would interest your character? The Staff the Storm King used to harness the power of the alicorn princesses (including Twilight sparkle) to mess up the days and nights and the week....

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It's a Bobblehead of the Storm King that is the item that transforms him

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okay. well, after acquiring the Bobble head Storm King and being transformed into the storm king, what would he do first?

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He finds out that the Storm King is actually a Mob boss. He then asks to get an update on all current business dealings and then orders someone to start watching of Canterlot High

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Where we can come in.

I'm aslo having the same situation

6675203
Possibly Filthy Rich (barnyard bargains) and Sweet apple acres (Granny and Filthy rich have a long-standing business agreement around Zap Apple season (100 jars of Zap apple jam to be sold at Barnyard Bargains). That would put AJ and Apple Bloom in your sights.

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Okay, who were you before you became Lyra? start with a basic description and what you were doing before you bought the item (a plushie of Lyra Heartstrings). For the Storm King, the Storm King Bobblehead (Merchandise from the MLP Movie).

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I was a psychopath about to be thrown in a mental hospital I just bought the headwear (I don't know if there headphones or something )

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I think it's a headphones or a hair accessory. DJ Pon3 would have her headphones, Octavia, her Cello, etc

Ok

Still I don't know

Principle characters
Princess Twilight Sparkle-Brony_Headbanger
Applejack - kwr2k13
Pinkie Pie - Silence.exe
Rainbow Dash -
Fluttershy -
Rarity -
Spike (Twilight's Dog)
Trixie -
Sunset Shimmer - shagohad12
Lyra Heartstrings-Mothra_Leo511
Octavia Melody - Darth Arcaneus
Vinyl Scratch/DJ Pon-3 - Hattafan2593
Zecora - Herbalist
Ember - Dragon Lord -
Shining Armor- Twilight's BBBFF -
Starlight Glimmer-
Dean Cadence -
Queen Chrysalis (Changeling Queen)

Pharynx -Brother of Changeling Leader Thorax
Derpy Hooves/Muffins -
Feelings Forum Moderator (Changeling)

Scootaloo - Ephedian Royalty
Sweetie Belle - JimmyHook19
Apple Bloom - The Blue EM2
Babs Seed -
Gabby Griffin-
Rumble-
Button Mash-
Pipsqueak-

Background characters

Maverick-DGJabberwocky
Rainbow "Double R" Rose - ScarletRhine
Konrad Coleson-Commodore Dread

Ember Light and Speedy Shot-Scootaloo's parents
Lightning Dust
Fleur De Lis
Fancy Pants
Pistachio
Butter Nut (Pistachio's mother)
Oak Nut (Father of Pistachio and Husband of Butter Nut)
Jet Set
Upper Crust
Berry Punch
Dinky Do
Moondancer
Coloratura/RaRa
Photo Finish
SvenGallop
Gladmane
Iron Will
The Dazzlings (Aria Blaze, Adagio Dazzle, Sonata Dusk)
Sapphire Shores (Singer/Entertainer)
Sassy Saddles (Rarity's business partner)
Spitfire
Principal Celestia and Vice-Principal Luna
Aunt Orange
Uncle Orange
Sunflower (Babs Seed's sister)
Discord (maths teacher at CHS)-Discord the Narrator
Strawberry Sunrise
Lilly Lace
Starstreak
Inky Rose
Hoity Toity
Soarin-soccer player-Terry the Human
Fleetfoot
Surprise
Wonderbolts (Sky Stinger and Vapor Trail)
Misty Fly
Spitfire
Cranky Doodle Donkey
Matilda
Mr. and Mrs. Cake with their kids, Pound and Pumpkin
Mayor Mare
Filthy Rich
Spoiled Rich
Diamond Tiara
Randolph (The Rich Family Butler)
Photo Finish (Photographer)
Silver Spoon
Twist
Raindrops (Pegasus student)
Cheerilee (a teacher at the school)
Ms. Harshwhinny (another teacher at the school)
Coco Pommel
Ms. Peachbottom
Any member of the extended Apple Family
Suri Polomare
Trenderhoof
Quibble Pants
Cheese Sandwich
Bon Bon/Sweetie Drops
The flower trio (florists) Lily, Daisy, and Roseluck
Dr. Whooves - Sanguine Blade
Little Strongheart
Chief Thunderhooves
Braeburn
Diamond Dogs (Spot/Fido)
Granny Smith
Apple Rose
Goldie Delicious - Apple Family Historian
Big McIntosh
Aunt Applesauce
Former Dragon Lord Torch (Ember's dad)
Principal Abacus Cinch -Crystal Prep administrator
Doughnut Joe
Prince Blueblood
Pina Colada
Sugarcoat
Lemon Zest
Indigo Zap
Sour Sweet
Bulk Biceps
Igneous Rock Pie and Cloudy Quartz
Minuette/Colgate
Twinkle Shine
Spa Ponies (Aloe and Lotus) - good for the spa scene for when Rarity treats her friends for the day spa scenes
Flim and Flam
Flurry Heart - foal of Shining Armor and Princess Cadence
Sunburst - Respected local historian
Crystal Ponies
Silver Shill
Prim Hemline
Blue Bobbin - Sales Associate of Rarity's
Plaid Stripes
Mr. Stripes - father of Plaid Stripes
Thorax (reformed Changeling)
Lord Tirek - Villain
Reformed Changelings under Thorax's leadership
Lemon Hearts
Cherry Jubilee
Ma Hoofield - Matriarch of the Hoofield Clan
Big Daddy McColt (McColt clan)
Treehugger
Daring Do/A.K. Yearling
Golden Harvest (Carrot farmer)
Gloriosa Daisy(Timber Spruce's sister)
Maud Pie
Juniper Montage - movie theater employee
Timber Spruce
Gilda Griffin
Dr. Callaberon
The Mane-iac
Troubleshoes
Cloudchaser
Flitter
Junebug
Berry Punch
Nurse RedHeart - school nurse
Nurse ponies
Coriander Cumin
Saffron Marsala - co-owner of the Tasty Treat with her father, Coriander Cumin
Zesty Gourmand - Food Critic
Featherweight
Zipporwill
Chipcutter
Hoofer Step - Dance Instructor
Tender Taps - Student at Ms. Hoofer Step's Dance Studio
Pony Joe - Donut Shop Owner
Fancy Pants
Fleur De Lis
Jet Set
Upper Crust
Clear Skies
Open Skies
Cloudy Skies
Fluffy Clouds
King Sombra - Villain
Sugar Belle
Feather Bangs
Featherweight
Party Favor
Double Diamond
Night Glider
Prince Rutherford - YakYakistan emissary
Yaks - Prince Rutherford's entourage
Any of Photo Finish's Entourage
Snips
Snails
Juniper Montage
Marble Pie
Limestone Pie
Grand Pear (AJ's maternal Grandfather)
Toola Roola
Coconut Crème
Burnt Oak (Firewood salesman and cousin of Bright Mac)
Davenport - Sofas and Quills Salesman
Cattail
Thunderlane
Flitter
Cloudkicker
Sassaflash
Blossomforth
Garble
Stellar Flare - Sunburst's Mother
Pear Butter - AJ's Mom
Bright McIntosh - AJ's Dad
Bow Hothoof - Rainbow Dash's dad
Windy Whistles - Rainbow Dash's Mom
Zephyr Breeze - Fluttershy's brother
Mr. and Mrs. Shy - Fluttershy's parents
Mr. Night Light - Twilight and Shining Armor's dad
Mrs. Twilight Velvet - Twilight and Shining Armor's mom
Wallflower Blush _Gardening Club President at CHS
Fuschia Blush
King Sombra (villain)
Grandpa Gruff - Gilda's grandfather
Fashion Plate
Ahuizotl (Daring Do villain)
Dr. Caballeron's henchponies
Flashlight - Starlight Glimmer's dad
Vignette Valencia
Sassy Saddles
Fedora Felt - Hat designer
Steven Magnet
Trixie -
Lyra Heartstrings-
Octavia Melody -
Vinyl Scratch/DJ Pon-3 - Hattafan2593
Zecora - Herbalist
Ember - Dragon Lord -
Shining Armor- Twilight's BBBFF -
Starlight Glimmer-shagohad12
Dean Cadence -
Queen Chrysalis (Changeling Queen)
Pharynx -Brother of Changeling Leader Thorax
Derpy Hooves/Muffins -
Feelings Forum Moderator (Changeling)
Octavia Melody-Darth Arcaneus

Starswirl the Bearded
Stygian
Somnabula
Mage Meadowbrook
Mistmane
Rockhoof
Flash Magnus

Storm King-Judoon_Warrior
Tempest Shadow aka Fizzlepop Berrytwist-HeartFireFirebrand
Grubber - evil sarcastic sidekick
Capper
Songbird Serenade
Skystar- daughter of Mayor Novo
Mayor Novo - Mayor of Canterlot
Captain Caeleno - Retired sailor
Captain Caeleno's crew (Lix Spittle, Boyle)

Smolder - orange dragon
Yona - Yak
Ocellus - reformed Changeling under Thorax's leadership
Sandbar - earth pony
Silverstream - Tranquil Stone
Gallus - Griffon student
MudBriar - Maud Pie's Boyfriend
Chancellor Neighsay - School board Superintendent - Head of EEA
Terramar - Hippogryph/Sea Pony
Ocean Spray- Mother of Silver Stream and Terramar
Cozy Glow
Autumn Blaze - Kirin
Sludge - A dragon

The Gift Givers of the Grove

Aurora
Bori
Alice

PM The Blue EM2 with chapter and story ideas. Above all, have fun!

Tranquil stone will be writing for Silverstream. Her people in Equestria the hippogryphs have a history with the Storm king invasion prior to the mlp movie. so, she may be terrified about it. luckily she will have her friends to help her defy The Storm King.