Starbourne: Simon's Exodus
This is a story I created, not in the MLP universe... but I’m still working on it would like some constructive criticism... but if this thread isn’t allowed, please delete it.
Preferably you keep things MLP-related, but if it isn't in the rules, you're free to do what you like!
Starbourne: Simon's Exodus
This is a story I created, not in the MLP universe... but I’m still working on it would like some constructive criticism... but if this thread isn’t allowed, please delete it.
Preferably you keep things MLP-related, but if it isn't in the rules, you're free to do what you like!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)