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Review: Forgotten Home

Tags: Gore, death, violence, dark, adventure, sci-fi,

Summary:  Race against time.

Review:  I read the three chapters.  So far I think it’s a bit interesting, although I’m not sure what the ending is going to be like. So, you want me to judge an incomplete fiction. So far I like it. The characters have an interesting story so far.  Time travel oh dear.  This could be good or worse a fiction but if it is needed then I guess it’s alright.  (zecora if one thing is messed up the time will change.  Alternate universe tag??? maybe???) 

Conclusion: this is at least an alright fiction so far I give this at least a 6/10 due to the incomplete  product that may change outcoming of user service? Please be aware.  Sure they might have points.  But remember this is your story not theirs. That is probably the hardest part because you're trying to please them.