Luna Needs Moneyz for dem Vidya Gaems! by TheMajorTechie
Pros: Questioning the royal guards efficience, great. Bookhorse, stays bookhorse in the story. Mischeavious Luna in charge of the night. Advertising, hilarious. Yes, get some laughts out of this story.
Cons: Mhh, surreptitious advertising, if my translation is correct. The writing style is a bit uncomftable to read.
Summary: I am not sure what to say actually, this story is weird/crazy but has some good jokes and a creative main idea that I didn't read before. It felt like Pinky sense must have felt for Twilight, you don't see why but it works and somehow entertains a bit.
However, while the story gives you a good chuckle at some scenes, it doesn't really leave an impression, besides the main idea.
Rating: 6/10 The story is very Random with a bit of comedy, fair enough with the tags.
Luna Needs Moneyz for dem Vidya Gaems! by TheMajorTechie
Pros:
Questioning the royal guards efficience, great.
Bookhorse, stays bookhorse in the story.
Mischeavious Luna in charge of the night.
Advertising, hilarious.
Yes, get some laughts out of this story.
Cons:
Mhh, surreptitious advertising, if my translation is correct.
The writing style is a bit uncomftable to read.
Summary:
I am not sure what to say actually, this story is weird/crazy but has some good jokes and a creative main idea that I didn't read before. It felt like Pinky sense must have felt for Twilight, you don't see why but it works and somehow entertains a bit.
However, while the story gives you a good chuckle at some scenes, it doesn't really leave an impression, besides the main idea.
Rating:
6/10 The story is very Random with a bit of comedy, fair enough with the tags.