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Celestia and the Mild Inconvenience by daOtterGuy

Pros:
An interesting idea for the story.
Interesting/Entertaining main character.
The story stays in pony limits for their actions.
Very much to the point in the scenes.

Cons:
A little bit small on the substance, it is a short story after all.

Summary:
A fine little short story which get to the point real quick. I was fairly entertained while reading and didn't found much to complain about. The main character has a realistic, in show limits, reasoning for his actions and Celestia, (or Trollestia) acts quite well and realistic too, if one doesn't believe she is always the good one.

However, the big laugh or the great impression that stay for longer is not there. A short story that entertains for a few minutes and thats it.

Rating:
8/10

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