Twilight Sparkle and the Unholy Existance of Comic Saaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnns by TechnoNerd

Amount Read: 100%
Verdict: Reject (3/10)
Reason:

What the heck even happened in this story? I suppose its only point is to demean the existence of comic sans. Other than a misspelling of the word existence in the title, I didn't notice much wrong in the way of mechanics, much like Nerd's last story I reviewed.

Also like the other one, there isn't much substance with regards to plot, characterization, and world building for the reader to appreciate. I suppose for the sake of being random, one can appreciate the inanity this narrative has to offer.

If there was one thing that I might suggest in the way of sattire, it is looking for that one focus to highlight. Something that resonates deeply with the soul, and then shedding light on it so that it can't hide. Let it be light-hearted, as the way it currently is, but also make it something that speaks to the reader.