Summary: Discord befriends an energetic pink pony after the events at the Gala.
Con's: Overall, the story was great and had only a few small mistakes, most likely just typing the wrong thing. At one part it did feel a bit rushed:
Discord took his paw off of Pinkie’s head and crossed his arms over his chest. He raised his head back to its normal place above Pinkie’s and shot her a look. Pinkie’s hair deflated and some tears started to form in her eyes.
But as I said, not very many cons and a very nice story.
Pro's: Honestly, I don't like the character Discord, but I enjoyed this story anyway. It was very cute and funny and Discord and Pinkie were very in character. I liked how it was short but sweet and definitely kept me reading. Great story!
Reviewing: Discord Makes A New Friend by LyraAlluse.
Summary: Discord befriends an energetic pink pony after the events at the Gala.
Con's: Overall, the story was great and had only a few small mistakes, most likely just typing the wrong thing. At one part it did feel a bit rushed:
But as I said, not very many cons and a very nice story.
Pro's: Honestly, I don't like the character Discord, but I enjoyed this story anyway. It was very cute and funny and Discord and Pinkie were very in character. I liked how it was short but sweet and definitely kept me reading. Great story!
This was my first review, I hope it's OK.
4946451 It's a great review, thanks for doing it!
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Thank you for the kind review. :) I appreciate it.
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You're welcome!
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