I need help with a story I have got a good premise but I don't want it to absolutely mess it up.

5346822 Well, what is the premise? Hard to help if we don't know what you need and what it is.

It's a story about Spike and his struggles as he comes to terms with his friends making him feel left out and abandoned all while solving murder cases as a Forensic Pathologist.

5346939 Ok, what do you need help with?

I don't know I just don't want to mess this up could you take a look at it? It's called Dr. Death PhD.

5347003 Well, not sure what I could say if I don't know what I am looking for.

That's fine I just need more vocal critics so that I can really get better at writing.

5347005 Well, I can give you a few hints that helped me. First, and most imporantly, find a long term editor to help on the story. As you write more and see what they tell you, you will learn more. 2nd, don't rush it. Take your time to make it the best you can.