So I'm currently writing a story which is a crossover between Sonic and the EQG series( I know some people are turned off by the idea due to Sonic, but bear with me.) My story has more dislikes than likes, and I am in the process of going back and making edits to grammar and description mainly. i would appreciate some more feedback in order to help me improve so I can make it better.

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Do you have a gdoc? I don't mind reading through and commenting, but it is generally much easier to comment as you read through, especially in a 120k mammoth of a fic.

5297477 Nah, but I could try to get one. So, I could try and make one.

and if I do, I should put the whole story on it right?