So I have finally written enough material to have it updated every two days, and I have been keeping that promise.

Though every time I update it, it gets a dislike after gaining a few views. As of now, it has a two to one ratio.

Does it have grammatical issues? Certainly. No one’s perfect; even with the basic version of Granmarly, it still has plenty of problems after editing it yesterday.
Story wise? Certainly has flaws. But maybe due to the fact that it's a sequel above all sequels (an issue I plan to address in a future blog), it's just a jog to go from story to story and back again.

Either way, I don't want the story to be down voted aimlessly each time I update it. If it’s any consolation, I do have some free time to give a trade review if you want.

Story Available Here.