Hey I just posted a new story called "Discord's Sunrise" and would appreciate some feedback on it, mainly because this is the first comedy story I've written and the first Discord story I've done and some of my prereaders mentioned I overuse the Discord 4th wall jokes but I'd like some input on how it's going and any suggestions for the future if possible.
Hey I just posted a new story called "Discord's Sunrise" and would appreciate some feedback on it, mainly because this is the first comedy story I've written and the first Discord story I've done and some of my prereaders mentioned I overuse the Discord 4th wall jokes but I'd like some input on how it's going and any suggestions for the future if possible.