Hiya!

Mewrilah here. My story, A Glimmer of Hope has turned out way better than I expected. I have a few people that have favorited the story, but when I ask them why they liked it, they don't reply. I was wondering if some of you would be so kind as to read it and then tell me what you think. I don't even care if you hate it. I just want some feedback on how I can improve.